Hi bloggers today we learnt how to write an email. First we had to write an email to our teacher about if we think pets should be allowed on public transport then we put it onto a google draw. We write emails to communicate with others . Have you ever written a email?
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 26, 2021
5 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Maisey I love the font you picked.
ReplyDeleteHave a good day from Elsie
Hi Maisey Aliah here. I like your email. Have a good day.
ReplyDeleteYours truly, Aliah
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ReplyDeleteHi Maisey it Owen.
ReplyDeleteI really like your Email demo it will really help me when I go to seen something to someone. Maybe next time you could add more slides and make it a bit bigger. In Toroa we have been needing to send some things for math bye see you soon
Hi Maisey! Its Daisy here. I really like this post. Maybe when you're writing your description you could proofread it to make sure it has punctuation and capital letters. Maybe you could make the screen a little bit bigger so that it is easier to read. Other than that, this post is really good. I hope you have a nice school holiday. Bye! - Daisy
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