Kia ora and welcome or welcome back to my blog. Everyday in lockdown (apart from friday) we do a quick write which is a five minute write about a picture that we get given. Today I am going to be showing you my quick write from Thursday. I hope you like it. Do you do a quick write tell me in the copopnmments below. Bye!
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, September 3, 2021
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.

Hi Maisey im Noah i do quick writes to we did that boat one on thursday maybe next time give some information on what a quick write is your story is very cool. Bye
ReplyDeleteHey Maisey, brilliant quick write. You always produce such descriptive writing. Next time you should tell us what language feature you are working on.
ReplyDeleteHey Maisey. amazing quick write, but maybe next time you should enplane more about what a quick write is. but over all you did a amazing job on it
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