In literacy this week I had to complete a story on a elephant called Nellie that lived in a circus but one day the circus caught on fire and Nellie had to go find another home but she got lost...
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 16, 2021
Nervous Nellie
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Hey Maisey, brilliant blog post! You have ticked off the think 6 really well. I love that you have explained a little bit about the Nellie story. Next time you post a DLO come and see a teacher or a year 6 so that we can make it a good size to read. Keep up the great work!
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